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The Secret Cafe

I used to go to this little place called the Secret Cafe in FL. First time writers and poets would share their work, support and critique each other in a fun and friendly environment. Welcome to that place online. My Secret Cafe. Grab a cup!

Members: 10
Latest Activity: Nov 19

Welcome to the Secret Cafe'

So here's my rules:

1. If you post your work here for critique, check out someone else's post as well and share your thoughts and experience. Even new writers have something to contribute.

2. Keep it constructive. Its all about helping one another be better writers and to help find our voice. Keep that in mind before you hit that "Post" button.

3. Don't just post anything. If you're posting for critique or you just want to share what your working on that's great! Just be prepared for some feedback from others. We're all friends here wanting to help but make sure your work is ready to go up. Don't have half a paragraph posted and wonder why you don't get any feedback.

4. Have fun. Relax. In the end its still your work so remember we're all in this together but you don't have to take every tidbit of advice tossed your way.

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Lynette

poem for critique 3 Replies

Started by Lynette. Last reply by JeSais Nov 19.

Michele K. Arnesen

Hello fellow writers. 1 Reply

Started by Michele K. Arnesen. Last reply by Lynette Sep 30.

Eric Way

Yes my poetry is a little silly and childish 1 Reply

Started by Eric Way. Last reply by Lynette Aug 11.

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Tyger Burch Comment by Tyger Burch on May 30, 2009 at 11:12pm
Thank you very much for your warm comments Doran. I'm glad the story struck a note with you. Its my intention to slowly build on Dalen's trek and his growth into becoming a self taught man of many talents, unfortunately for him that means he may shall we say "misinterpretation" what his skills may be. I always hear these stories about kids on the street who grow into these men with hollow hearts or grand heroes but never anything that far in between and wanted to explore that. Here you'll see a boy become a man struggling to be a good person and good at what he does and falters often at both because he never really had that help he should have gotten.

The woman from the orphanage is a key player later in the story and as you learn more about her I hope as a ready you'll understand and maybe even respect her motivations for doing what she did, though not entirely the good adult thing to do.

Thanks again for resparking my motivation! I look forward to reading some of your work as well.
Tyger Burch Comment by Tyger Burch on April 29, 2009 at 3:40pm
Thanx for the support JeSais. Be sure to check out my sample scene. Would love to hear your critique.
JeSais Comment by JeSais on April 29, 2009 at 3:35pm
Great idea!
 

Members (10)

Lynette Joe Hartley Richard Tyger Burch Eric Way JeSais Irma Berumen Michele K. Arnesen Margaret Dilloway Single Girl in San Diego
 
 

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Welcome San Diego Writers!

Grab a cup of coffee, pull up a chair and stay awhile. Let's talk about writing.

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